The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
A quick glance at the diagrams
show
information about how many stages were lived of Change the verb form
shows
large
Correct article usage
a large
fish
called the Use synonyms
salmon
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there are three types Linking Words
Use synonyms
fish
Change preposition
of fish
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such
Correct quantifier usage
apply
as
the smallest one is fry Change preposition
apply
and
Correct word choice
apply
it
is approximately 3-8 cm Correct pronoun usage
which
of
body. Next is smolt Change preposition
in
fish
and their body about 12-15 cm. The biggest Use synonyms
fish
is Use synonyms
salmon
, Use synonyms
salmon
’s body is 70-76 cm.
In terms of explaining Use synonyms
process
, Add an article
the process
a process
upper
river is Add an article
the upper
slow
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slow-moving
moving
and there are some reeds. Under the reeds, some stones with Verb problem
apply
salmon
eggs and they are approximately 5-6 months. After 5-6 months eggs become fries, and the habitat changes to a fast-flowing lower river. Fry lives there for approximately 4 years, Use synonyms
then
it grows and becomes smolt.
With regards to the diagram, smolts live in the open sea for 5 years, Linking Words
then
they become adult Linking Words
salmon
and they leave their eggs in the upper river. It can be seen that how the life cycle of Use synonyms
salmon
continues.Use synonyms
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