The Line graph illustrates the number of UK daily users of different transportation over the period of 60 years.

The graph demonstrates how UK citizens used different types of transportation, with a prediction for the future decade until 2030.

Overall

, it is evident from the data that cars were the most preferable form of transport and even the

number

of drivers

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expected to increase.

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, buses were steadily losing

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position throughout the period. It is interesting to note that, the

number

of commuters that had a car increased in

period

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the period

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from 1980 until 2000. After growing, the

number

of car users remained stable for the decade.

However

, 2010 witnessed an incline for approximately half a million drivers. The public transport commuters

were tend

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to choose buses rather than trains back in 1970,

however

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it is predicted to be changed. Throughout

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the given period the

number

of bus users slowly decreased, and had reached the point of 3,2

millions

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users by 2020.

On the other hand

, the partition of train commuters increased and even projected to incline.