You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the information about the average highest

temperature

of a day in two different

cities

in New Zealand and

United

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the United

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Kingom

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Kingdom

in twelve months. The types of information are categorized into

Auckland

,

Christchurch

,

London

and

Edinburgh

.

Overall

, it is obvious that the

cities

in the UK experience warmer

condition

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conditions

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in the middle of the

year

, as begin and end with

the

Correct article usage

apply

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colder

condition

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conditions

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, compared to those in New Zealand.

London

and

Edingburgh

Correct your spelling

Edinburgh

start the

year

with approximately 5

degrees

.The climate patterns of

London

and

Edinburgh

followed

the

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a

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similar pattern, the

temperature

gradually

rise

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rose

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in the first half of the

year

.

Although

London

has more hotter climate compared to

Edinburgh

. In both

Cities

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Cities,

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the highest peak is between July and August, with nearly 22

degrees

in

London

and 18

degrees

in

Edinburgh

. From September to November, it shows a steady decrease until it met

at

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apply

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the same figure, with nearly 6

degrees

, in December.

In contrast

,

Auckland

and

Christchurch

experience

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experienced

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the highest

temperature

at the beginning of the

year

, at approximately 24 and 22, respectively. After that, the

temperature

moderately

reduce

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reduced

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from February to June until dip into the lowest point in July, at about 15 in

Auckland

and 12 in

Christchurch

. From September both

cities

are getting colder every month.

However

,

at the end

of the

year

,

Auckland

has comparatively less cold than

Christchurch

by having temperatures around 22.