The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph illustrates the information about the average highest

temperature

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of a day in two different

cities

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in New Zealand and

United

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Kingom

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Kingdom

in twelve months. The types of information are categorized into

Auckland

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,

Christchurch

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,

London

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and

Edinburgh

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.

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, it is obvious that the

cities

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in the UK experience warmer

condition

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conditions

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in the middle of the

year

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, as begin and end with

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colder

condition

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conditions

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, compared to those in New Zealand.

London

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and

Edingburgh

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Edinburgh

start the

year

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with approximately 5

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.The climate patterns of

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and

Edinburgh

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followed

the

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similar pattern, the

temperature

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gradually

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in the first half of the

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.

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London

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has more hotter climate compared to

Edinburgh

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. In both

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Cities

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the highest peak is between July and August, with nearly 22

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in

London

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and 18

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in

Edinburgh

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. From September to November, it shows a steady decrease until it met

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the same figure, with nearly 6

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, in December.

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,

Auckland

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and

Christchurch

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experience

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the highest

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at the beginning of the

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, at approximately 24 and 22, respectively. After that, the

temperature

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moderately

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from February to June until dip into the lowest point in July, at about 15 in

Auckland

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and 12 in

Christchurch

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. From September both

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are getting colder every month.

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,

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of the

year

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,

Auckland

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has comparatively less cold than

Christchurch

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by having temperatures around 22.