The charts demonstrate the proportion of the pie charts in both years , show the largest percentage for relaxing hours at home and working hours.
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consumed by adult workers on various activities in one country between 1958 and 2008.
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with family or friends.
Regarding the pie charts in 1958 and 2008, the work represents the highest percentage (33% and 42%) , respectively . Use synonyms
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is followed by sleeping forms ( 32% and 25%).
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spent with family or friends demonstrated 19% in 1958 compared to 2008 was dramatically decreased to only 6%.
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in 2008 rose sharply to 13%.
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as travel to work slightly rose from 2% in 1958 to 8% in 2008 Linking Words
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playing sports was no significant change between 1958 and 2008.Correct article usage
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