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The chart below shows participation of Australian children in certain sport activities outside of school hours. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows participation of Australian children in certain sport activities outside of school hours. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data provided indicates
participation
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the participation
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 of Australian kids in
sports
 after school hours.
Overall
,
while
boys
 prefer attending classes in football at the most of all
sports
 categories,
girls
 prefer the same
sports
 as their least.
To begin
 with, schoolboys supremely favour playing football outside of school hours at 18%.
On the other hand
,
girls
 indicated the lowest rate
in
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 playing football among all the categories with 3%.
On the contrary
, netball mostly consists of
girls
 at 13% which is the highest of all
girls
 participation in
sports
. In spite of that,
boys
 had the lowest favour playing netball with only 2%.
Furthermore
,
boys
 attend basketball class for about 12% which is the second rank of
boys
 preference
while
girls
 only accumulated 9%.
Similarly
,
while
boys
 accounted for 9% of spending time in swimming,
girls
 showed 2% higher at 11%. An eye-catching part is the children who do not participate at all in
sports
 showed both
girls
 and
boys
 under 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, boys, girls with synonyms.
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