The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and bar chart describe the sources of
income
and outcome of the police budget of Britain in a period of 2 years.
It is noticeable that the biggest income
of the police budget in both years is
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was
national
government, Add an article
the national
while
most money
was spent on salaries
of officers and staff.
Looking into more Correct article usage
the salaries
details
, the Fix the agreement mistake
detail
income
from local taxes saw a dramatically
Change the adverb
dramatic
raise
during the years, which gained 102.3 Correct your spelling
rise
million
a year comparing
to 91.2 Change the form of the verb
compared
million
in 2017. However
, the income
of national
government and other sources only increased Add an article
the national
less
than 3 Change preposition
by less
million
. Overall
, the total income
gained a 13.9 million
raise.
In terms of the spendings
, the proportion of Fix the agreement mistake
spending
money
spend
on technology almost doubled from 2017 to 2018, Wrong verb form
spent
while
the amount of money
spend
on salaries of officers and staff gently declined. The Change the form of the verb
spent
mount
of Correct your spelling
amount
money
spent on buildings and transport, however
, remained steady at 17%.Submitted by 1434110674 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, money, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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