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the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
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The
percentage
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 of the population in four Asian countries Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia, who have been living in cities from 1970 to 2020, and the anticipated
percentage
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 that will be living in the years 2030 and 2040 is illustrated in the graph below.
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, a massive boost in the
percentage
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 of urban settled individuals has
occured
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occurred
 since the year 2020 and is anticipated for the future in all 4 countries. In the Philippines, starting at around 30 per
cent
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 in 1970, after a slight
increase
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 by 1980, a massive growth to just below 50 per
cent
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 is shown, with a gradual
increase
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 to around 43 per
cent
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 in 2020 and
then
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 a consistent
increase
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 to around 60 per
cent
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 in 2040. In Thailand, from just below 20 per
cent
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 in 1970, the gradual rise to around 45 per
cent
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 by the year 2040 can be seen, but from 1990 to 2020, there is pretty much no remarkable
increase
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 in the
percentage
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 but it goes back to the normal pattern from 2020.
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