the chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

the chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The given chart illustrates the
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percentage of individuals who consumed fruit and vegetables in five servings in the United Kingdom in the span of 7 years from 2001 to 2008.
Overall
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it is obvious that the percentage for women was the most followed by men
while
children had the smallest figure for eating fruit and vegetables.
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, it can be seen that the proportion of people eating fruit and vegetables in the UK had a significant increase. The percentage for women increased steadily from 2001 to 2006 and had its peak in 2006 with over 30
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then
having a steady slight decrease to 30%. The figure for men almost stayed the same from 2001 to 2003
then
started climbing rapidly to reach its double top in 2006 and 2007 with a little below 30
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and finished the year
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2008
with
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slightly below that. The proportion
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children
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Men during the years from 2001 to 2003 with over 25
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and reached its high in 2007 by a little below 25
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