the chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

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percentage of individuals who consumed fruit and vegetables in five servings in the United Kingdom in the span of 7 years from 2001 to 2008.

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it is obvious that the percentage for women was the most followed by men

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children had the smallest figure for eating fruit and vegetables.

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, it can be seen that the proportion of people eating fruit and vegetables in the UK had a significant increase. The percentage for women increased steadily from 2001 to 2006 and had its peak in 2006 with over 30

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having a steady slight decrease to 30%. The figure for men almost stayed the same from 2001 to 2003

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started climbing rapidly to reach its double top in 2006 and 2007 with a little below 30

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and finished the year

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2008

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slightly below that. The proportion

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children

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experienced the same

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Men during the years from 2001 to 2003 with over 25

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and reached its high in 2007 by a little below 25

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