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The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates what UK
graduate
 and postgraduate
students
 who did not go into
full time
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full-time
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job
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jobs
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 did after leaving college
during
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in
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 2008. Job perspectives
divided
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were divided
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 into four fields which were described number of
students
.
Overall
, among
graduate
 and postgraduate
students
, there was a tendency
of
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to
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 increase in
further
 study section and they were likely to attend the least in voluntary
work
. Part-time
work
 and unemployment
situation
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situations
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 had much more
differency
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difference
.
In the
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 first chart,
it
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apply
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showed
graduate
students
’ research in 2008,
further
 study was the highest compared to others which was 29665 and the voluntary
work
bottomed-out
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 at 3500. Unemployment and part-time
work
 were in parallel at 16235 and 17735 respectively.
Finally
, in the second chart, postgraduate
students
 tended to do
further
 study and part-time
work
 which differed from
graduate
students
 at 2725 and 2535. The lowest was voluntary
work
 at the rate of 345
students
 and
unemployment
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the unemployment
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students
were
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was
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 1625.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduate, students, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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