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The charts give information about the diet and general health of two groups of students. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts give information about the diet and general health of two groups of students. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The juxtaposed table and pie chart demonstrate the information about the
diet
 and general health condition of individuals by percentage from
Group
 A and
B
 .
Overall
 , it is clear
while
 cereals are considered
as
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the most popular type of
diet
 in
Group
 A , the corresponding
diet
 for
Group
B
 is associated with food with
a
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high fat
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 content. Both
Group
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Groups
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 A and
B
were
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accounted for the most popular tendency of attendance at classes . In terms of pie charts , it is obvious that there is a narrow disparity between
fruit
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the fruit
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diet
 of
Group
 A and
Goup
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Group
B
 by 3
percent
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 5 and 8
percent
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, respectively . The cereals and fish
diet
 are almost the same with 35 and 5
percent
 ,
accordingly
 .There is a significant difference between people who prefer
vegetable
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a vegetable
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diet
 between
Group
 A and
Group
B
. In terms of
table
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the table
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 , it is evident that
th emost
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the most
 popular health activity both in
Group
 A and
B
are
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accounted for attendance at classes which is nearly 90 and 75
percent
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, respectively .
Overweight
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 problem is
also
 the second
prevalent
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most prevalent
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 health issue between
group
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groups
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 A and
B
 with
former
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the former
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standin
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standing
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standin'
gfirst
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first
 with 10
percent
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,
the
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and the
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 latter
20
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with 20
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percent
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.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words diet, group, b, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dietary patterns
  • nutritional intake
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fast food consumption
  • health indicators
  • diet quality
  • beverages
  • sugary drinks
  • health outcomes
  • obesity
  • physical activity
  • fatigue
  • health maintenance
  • anomalies
  • trends
  • balance
  • comparison
  • correlation
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