The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line chart depicts the proportion of
Internet
usage in England by different ages in four years
(2003, 2004, 2005 and 2006) counted by percentages..
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Overall
, it is clear from the illustrated data that in all the mentioned years
, the dominant category of British people who are using the Internet
were between 16 and 24 as compared to the lowest percentages of the eldest who are above 65 years
old.
In terms of 2003, people between 16 and 24 had the highest rate of internet
consumption (80%) but there was no interest in the internet
with the eldest (0%). Furthermore
, the values were exactly the same for ages (25-44) and (45-54) with 80%.
Moreover
, there was a noticeable growth in using the internet
through the years
for all ages.Submitted by s116656m on
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