Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects at universities in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society
In the majority of young Turkish prefer to major in the
last
decade, more and more students prefer to take art
subjects
instead
of science
at universities. This
is due to
the fact that science
subjects
are considered boring and do not appeal to young people. In addition
, they believe that these subjects
are difficult to score. Therefore
, the impacts on communities are that there will be a lack of science
experts in the country
and foreigners are needed to work
in sectors involving science
and technology.
First and foremost, boredom is the main reason youngsters refuse to take up science
major
at universities. It is said that Fix the agreement mistake
majors
science
subjects
are dull and difficult to comprehend. For example
, survey
shows thatCorrect article usage
a survey
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the
art
fields. This
is because they believe that they could do better in these fields than science
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in science
Consequently
, the number of students who register in art
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sectors
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increases
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last
few years, while
science
field saw a significant decrease.
The implications of these on the communities are that there would be Correct article usage
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number of Change the article
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the insufficient
science
experts among the locals and the country
has
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would have
work
in science
and technology related
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technology-related
In other words
, with the influx art
graduates in the job market, there will be a shortage of those who could Change preposition
of art
work
in science
sector. Add an article
the science
Hence
, the country
is forced to hire foreigners. Take for
instance, most locals in Saudi Arabia choose to do Add the comma(s)
, for
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art-related
subjects
at tertiary
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the tertiary
As a result
, the government has to recruit foreign workers to work
as doctors, nurses and engineers in the country
.
In conclusion, the high level of difficulty in science
subjects
and being bored with them are the main contributing factors why
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art
subjects
at universities. Thus
, these lead to the
decrease in the number of local experts in Correct article usage
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science
field and Add an article
the science
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forces
country
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider varying your sentence structures to make the text more engaging.
Task Response
To improve, aim to integrate a wider variety of vocabulary related to science and art subjects.
Task Response
Include more specific examples or data to support your points, such as citing specific surveys or studies.
Coherence and Cohesion
You have structured your essay well, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
Task Achievement
Your essay effectively addresses both parts of the question (reasons and effects) in a comprehensive manner.
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