The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.

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The line chart illustrates the changes in
citizens
of the two countries (India and China) over a 50-year
period
starting in 2000,
along with
projections until 2050.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
population
of the two countries have grown significantly by the end of the
period
. At the beginning of the
period
, the
population
country, namely India has only 1.000 Billion
citizens
. In the following 20 years, India's
population
has gradually increased approximately 1.3 times since 2000. The projection
citizens
surpass China's
population
in 2030 and will reach the peak by the end of 2050 and will have 1.6
citizens
in 2050 In China,
while
almost 1.500 Billion in 2000, the number
does
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not significantly increase in 2020 only 1.400 billion.
Moreover
, the forecast predicts a slower rise in upcoming years and reach a peak of approximately 1.450 in 2030. After 2030, the number slightly
decrease
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decreases
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until the end of a given
period
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