Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Pension is one of the most crucial benefits of after-work advantages. In many countries, the

age

of retirement is pre-defined by the authorities and

law makers

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. A certain segment of individuals argues that a certain category of

workers

should be retired at their earliest phase of

life

. I raise my hand to the folks who support

this

notion and I will elaborate on my stance in the ensuing paragraphs supported by logical reasoning and relevant examples. Analyzing the statement and explaining

further

, the first and foremost reason to support my statement is

physical

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the physical

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and mental well-being of

workers

. There are certain types of jobs, which require intense physical labour,

such

as construction,

carpenter

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, warehouse packaging and many other jobs. It becomes difficult for

such

type or

workers

to produce

same

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amount of output

at

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in

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their 60’s as compared to 30’s.

Moreover

, having

employed

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at hospitals and secret agencies, employees find it unmanageable to lighten up the same amount of concentration and dedication at

older

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an older

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age

.

However

, by providing benefits at

early

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an early

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age

, it can increase the probability of opportunities for young and

deserve

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people to fill

required

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the required

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position

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,

hence

encourage

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them to

fulfill

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their dreams at

early

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an early

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age

. Moving

further

, people who work in

National

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army and indulge in physical labour should benefit from early retirement.

For instance

, an army officer spent most of his

life

to serve

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country

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the country

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and people. Having retirement benefits at

earliest

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the earliest

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phase can give

liberty

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them liberty

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and freedom to spend

rest

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the rest

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of their

life

with families and relatives.

Moreover

, it would provide a golden opportunity

to

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employees to work on interests and hobbies to pursue

theirs

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dreams after working relentlessly for

entire

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their entire

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life

.

To conclude

, countries should take measures to enforce laws for the conduct of superannuation at

early

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an early

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age

for specific fields for the well-being of

workers

and to let humans

to

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apply

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enjoy

their

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rest of

life

with families and by involving in some kind of areas of

interests

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interest

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.