The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams depict the manufacturing of natural
silk
clith
from Correct your spelling
cloth
silk worms
and the various stages of its life cycle.
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silkworms
Overall
,the process of producing silk
cloth from the silk worm
includes different stages Correct your spelling
silkworm
such
as selecting,boiling,unwinding, twisting, dyeing and weaving.
It is explicit that the first picture depicts a metamorphosis of a silkworm. At the initial stage, eggs are hatched on top of the mulberry leaf, and before the silk
threads are produced, the eggs are developed into larvae
. After that,silk
thread
is naturally processed from the larvae
within a period of 4-6 weeks. In the next stage, these larvae
develop into cocoons over a period of three to eight days.Subsequently
, larvae
fully develop into moths.
The next diagram depicts the manufacturing of silk
cloth from silkworms.First and foremost, the fittest larvae
with the best silk
thread
are selected and boiled in a vessel filled with three-fourths of water.The boiling process then
helps in unwinding of
the Change preposition
apply
silk
thread
, which measures approximately 300 to 900 m. Following that, the silk
thread
is twisted before being dyed into a variety of colours.Finally
, these dyed silk
threads are woven into different patterns.Submitted by crpnivedya.prasannan on
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