You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.
Dear Mr Rahimi
i
am writing regarding Change the capitalization
I
problem
Correct article usage
a problem
while
staying at a hotel, A couple of Correct your spelling
days
dey
ago I called to hotel for reservation posh room Correct your spelling
day
whit
leisure Correct your spelling
with
ameities
Correct your spelling
amenities
then
After paying the fee,it was done sad to say i
went hotel,Change the capitalization
I
noticed
that there Correct word choice
and noticed
is
no empty room
so cases Wrong verb form
was
i
stay several hours.Change the capitalization
I
i
have 2 Change the capitalization
I
child
they Change to a plural noun
children
were
need Unnecessary verb
apply
rest
.so Fix the infinitive
to rest
receptionist
helped me Correct article usage
the receptionist
for
rest my Change preposition
to
child ceraped
room Correct your spelling
child's
provid
Correct your spelling
provided
then
He gave us delicious food for free.I suggest Call
the passengers a day before and Wrong verb form
Calling
make
the necessary arrangements Reservations can be made systemically.
Yours sincerely Farhad AnsariWrong verb form
making
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logical structure
Consider organizing your ideas more clearly with separate paragraphs for each point.
greeting and closing
Include a salutation at the beginning and a closing statement for a more formal tone.
single idea per paragraph
Make sure to describe the problem, the solution, and your suggestion in separate paragraphs for clarity.
complete response
Provide more detailed information about your experience to fully complete the response.
suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a formal tone throughout your letter.
complete response
You addressed all the required points of the task effectively.
suitable writing tone
Your concluding statement was appropriate and polite.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.