You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

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Dear Mr Rahimi
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am writing regarding
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while
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staying at a hotel, A couple of
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dey
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ago I called to hotel for reservation posh room
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leisure
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amenities
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After paying the fee,it was done sad to say
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went hotel,
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that there
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no empty room so cases
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stay several hours.
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have 2
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need
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.so
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the receptionist
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helped me
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rest my
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child's
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provided
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He gave us delicious food for free.I suggest
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the passengers a day before and
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the necessary arrangements Reservations can be made systemically. Yours sincerely Farhad Ansari
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logical structure
Consider organizing your ideas more clearly with separate paragraphs for each point.
greeting and closing
Include a salutation at the beginning and a closing statement for a more formal tone.
single idea per paragraph
Make sure to describe the problem, the solution, and your suggestion in separate paragraphs for clarity.
complete response
Provide more detailed information about your experience to fully complete the response.
suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a formal tone throughout your letter.
complete response
You addressed all the required points of the task effectively.
suitable writing tone
Your concluding statement was appropriate and polite.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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