the graphs show basic information about employment

The information about the number of males and females who

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in different countries from 1995 to 2005 is depicted by the rendered bar representation. The data has been calibrated in percentage.

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, it can be vividly manifested that the figures of women experienced a downward trend throughout the whole period,

while

men can be seen with an upward trend till the end of the period. Upon initial examination of the chart, it is evident that a tremendous disparity was noticed in the ratio of girls and boys in Australia in 1995 which was around 50% and 30%,

whereas

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and female employers was nearly 70% and 39% in 2005, respectively.

Further

analysis reveals that the percentile of gentlemen in Switzerland in 1995 was 65% which was followed by ladies with 53%, whilst there had been a difference of 10% between the both

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of employees in 2015. Probing ahead,

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proportion of male workers was observed in Iceland, 70%, than female workers with 40%. Analyzing the data

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fraction of men in 2005 was apparent in

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,

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and

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,

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for 70% each. Henceforward, a negligible incline could be seen in the numbers of males in 1995 in UK,

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and USA, correspondingly. Moving

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females underwent flux in three nations in 1995 and 2005.