the graphs show basic information about employment

the graphs show basic information about employment
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The information about the number of males and females who
employed
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in different countries from 1995 to 2005 is depicted by the rendered bar representation. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
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, it can be vividly manifested that the figures of women experienced a downward trend throughout the whole period,
while
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men can be seen with an upward trend till the end of the period. Upon initial examination of the chart, it is evident that a tremendous disparity was noticed in the ratio of girls and boys in Australia in 1995 which was around 50% and 30%,
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the data
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males
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and female employers was nearly 70% and 39% in 2005, respectively.
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analysis reveals that the percentile of gentlemen in Switzerland in 1995 was 65% which was followed by ladies with 53%, whilst there had been a difference of 10% between the both
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of employees in 2015. Probing ahead,
significantly
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more
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higher
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proportion of male workers was observed in Iceland, 70%, than female workers with 40%. Analyzing the data
further
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,
similar
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fraction of men in 2005 was apparent in
UK
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the UK
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,
Newzealand
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New Zealand
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and
USA
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the USA
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,
acconted
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accounting
for 70% each. Henceforward, a negligible incline could be seen in the numbers of males in 1995 in UK,
Newzealand
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New Zealand
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and USA, correspondingly. Moving
further
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, the figures
of
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females underwent flux in three nations in 1995 and 2005.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment sectors
  • economic cycles
  • recessions
  • booms
  • demographic groups
  • qualifications
  • employability
  • globalization
  • outsourcing
  • multilingual
  • remote work
  • freelance
  • technological advancements
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