The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate alterations
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the proportion of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and
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from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that in non-Australian-born, the percentage of the cities did not change between 1995 and 2010.
On the contrary
, the proportion of individuals who reside in urban
areas
increased gradually. In 1995, the percentage of people who were born in Australia and lived in the cities was 50% and in 2010, it rose to 64%.
In addition
, the number of individuals who lived in the towns decreased from 20% to 15% between 1995 and 2010.
It is clear that
there was an enormous decline in the rural
areas
from 30% to 15% of Australian-born. For the non-Australian population, there is no difference in the two charts in the number of rural
areas
.
However
, the proportion of towns and rural
areas
reduced slightly from 1995 to 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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