The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.
The visual above shows the process of aluminium cans recycling.
There are four main stages starting from the collection center to the end product which are the drinking cans in the kiosks.
There are four operations that occur in the recycling plant. It starts by melting down the used containers and gathering them in a pile which is called new aluminum. After
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those piles will be reshaped and ironed to make a sheet. Sheets will be rolled into a can shape. The finished products will be sold to the consumers as usual.Add a comma
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