The bar chart illustrates the statics of (Brunswick New , Nova Scotia, Quebec, Alberta, British Columbia, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, Ontario) International graduates, Canadian University, between 2001 and 2006. Units are measured in percentage.

The bar chart illustrates the statics of (Brunswick New , Nova Scotia, Quebec, Alberta, British Columbia, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, Ontario) International graduates, Canadian University, between 2001  and 2006. Units are measured in percentage.
The graph compares international graduates and Canadian universities' statistics by percentage over the past 5 years.
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, what is most striking when looking at the data is that in terms of 2006, the rates of every region on the presented data, have a significant amount of variation
according to
the proportions of 2001. More precisely, it is evident that it saw a growth of approximately 40–50% throughout the course of 5 years. On the one hand, based on
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, the bar chart, the
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of Ontario, Labrador, and Manitoba remain the same.
Nevertheless
, after half a decade, its proportions saw an increase nearly twice as much, to 6–7%, respectively. Turning to Alberta and British Columbia's percentages, they began at the same figures before going into a tailspin of approximately 8–11% in 2006.
On the other hand
, it is salient to note that Brun, New
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, Nova Scotia, and Quebec's rates were nearly 5-6%.
However
, the amounts of Brunswick, New
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, and Nova Scotia faced a substantial increase of around 100% during the past 5 years. If we look at Quebec's proportion,
it is clear that
it saw only a negligible amount of growth over a 5-year period.
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  • Illustrates
  • Statistics
  • International graduates
  • Canadian University
  • Percentage
  • Analysis
  • Factors
  • Trend
  • Comparison
  • Speculating
  • Challenges
  • Outcomes
  • Implications
  • Recruitment
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  • Global education
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