The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The bar chart illustrates shares of expenditures for five categories (
Food
, Housing, Transportation, Health
care
, and Clothing) in different countries ( United States, Canada, United Kingdom, and Japan) in 2009. Overall
, it is seen that shares of expenditures for housing, food
, and transportation in all given counties showed high
rate compared Correct article usage
a high
the
categories for Change preposition
to the
health
care
and clothing.
With regard food
, Japan had Change preposition
to food
a
highest rate among Change the article
the
four
countries. Correct article usage
the four
This
figure was approximately 23%..
United States witnessed less than 15% Replace the punctuation
.
...
while
they had a
highest figure for housing, reaching a peak of about 26%. Change the article
the
Although
Canada was over 15% in food
, housing, and transportation, they accounted a
slight part Change preposition
for a
for
Change preposition
of
health
care
and clothing.
In the case of health
care
, except for the percentage for United
States, all three countries recorded less than 5%.Correct article usage
the United
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