The line graph shows how many chores there were in four different economic sectors in the US from 1960 to 2020.
The line graph shows how many chores there were in four different economic sectors in the US from 1960 to 2020.
Overall
, number
of jobs in Change the article
the number
agriculture
and retail sectors increased over the whole period, Correct article usage
the agriculture
while
works
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work
for
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in
healthcare
sector saw a slight decline. It is Correct article usage
the healthcare
also
clear that the figure for hiring employees in manufacturing remained stableSubmitted by Shaxnoza on
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