The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart highlights information on the proportion of British
floks
giving Correct your spelling
folks
flocks
money
to charity
by different age
range
for the years 1990 and 2010.
Fix the agreement mistake
ranges
Overall
, from the age
of 18 to more than 65 age
group
donate their money
to a charity
.In 1990, age
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the age
group
of 36-50 donated highest
percentage of Correct article usage
the highest
money
and in 2010, it is
done by Wrong verb form
was
51
-65 Correct article usage
the 51
age
group
.
In 1990, money
from 18
-25 Correct article usage
the 18
age
group
is
the lowest and highest is fron people مas more than 40% Wrong verb form
was
individuals
. In Change preposition
of individuals
age
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the age
group
of 26-35 and more than 65 the people who had given money
to charity
are almost equal. Nearly 42% Change preposition
of peopl
peopl
had donated their Correct your spelling
people
money
to charity
from 51
-65 Correct article usage
the 51
age
group
.
Further
, in the year 2020, very fee
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few
floks
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folks
flocks
had
donated their Unnecessary verb
apply
money
to charity
from age
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the age
group
18-25.35%of
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18-25.35
indivduals
had given Correct your spelling
individuals
money
from 36-50 as well as
older
than 65 Correct determiner usage
those older
age
to charity
.Less than 25% of people from 26-35 ag and less than 40% of public
from 51-65 Add an article
the public
age
had donated money
to charity
.Submitted by akshayashvi07 on
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