The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts illustrate the different levels of both male and female
students
' qualifications in Australia in the year 1999. The unit on the X-axis is shown in percent
.
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per cent
According to
the figure, it can be seen that the Skilled Vocational Diploma
by male students
is the highest compared to the other levels. On the other hand
, females in this
level occupy the lowest.
In the year 1999, the majority of male students
attended to the Skilled Vocational Diploma
which wasaccounted
for 90%. The Postgraduate Correct your spelling
was accounted
has accounted
Diploma
came the second place with 70%. Moreover
, the Undergraduate Diploma
was not interesting to male students
with roughly 35% of male students
in the program.
On the contrary
, There was a reversed trend in both Skilled Vocational Diploma
and Undergraduate Diploma
. Female students
most likely enrolled for the Undergraduate Diploma
which was about 70%. While
,
only 10% of female Remove the comma
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students
decided to attend to skilled vocational diploma
. Additionally
, the Bachelor's Degree
of females were almost the same as males, the gap between the genders was only 5%.Fix the agreement mistake
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