The Bar Chart Below Shows shares of Expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, The United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The Bar Chart Below Shows shares of Expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, The United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the proportions of expenses
in
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food
, housing,
transportation
, health care, and clothing in four countries in 2009.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the expenses of housing,
food
, and
transportation
were higher rather than those of the other two categories. Regarding the chart, it is obvious that in the USA a significant amount of money was allocated to housing and
transportation
, with nearly 25% and 20%, respectively,
while
all other three sectors accounted for less than 15%. In Canada, the expenditure of housing was as high as that of
transportation
with 20%
whereas
food
ranked second with 15%, and health care and clothing were altogether responsible for roughly 10%. Focusing on other countries, in the United Kingdom there was little difference between the shares of housing and
food
,
while
the former accounted for approximately 25%, the latter was lower by a margin of 5%. The remaining sectors were altogether responsible for a mere 23%. In Japan, the figures for
food
and housing were the same with 22%
as well as
health care and clothing with 5%, whilst
the
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transportation
accounted for a tenth.
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