The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
The bar graph gives information about the expenditure on three groups among various
age
categories of inhabitants in the UK in 2004.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the food and drinks portion had a stable difference between age
groups, and the least difference between each domain was in the 31-45 group.
Looking into detail, the young people
who have
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are
age
under 30 years
old spend their money on meals and beverages at nearly 5%. It was a gradual increase in every age
group and reached around 23% for people
76 years
old and above. Similarly
, citizens that
spending on their money in terms of entertainment rose significantly and reached a peak in the Correct word choice
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ages
group 71-75 Change the noun form
age
years
old at 23% before dropping to just below 15% in the people
76 years
old and above.
In contrast
, the total expense of restaurants and hotels has the highest value in people
under 30 years
old, comprising of
14%. Change preposition
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Additionally
, it went down slightly in citizens in
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aged
age
31-45 years
old and stood the same with the people
around 46-60 years
old at just above 10%. Moreover
, it declined in 61-75 aged people
at just below 5% before increasing in community
76 Fix the agreement mistake
communities
years
old and above around 6%.Submitted by Name_1234 on
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