The graph below shows the percentage of Azerbaijan’s export to four countries from 1990 to 2012.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of Azerbaijan’s export to four countries from 1990 to 2012. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares changes in the shares of Azerbaijan’s
export
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to four countries over a 22-year period between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
figures for China and India follow an upward trend,
whereas
those for Japan and
US
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have a downward one. Regarding the diagram, it is evident that the figure for Japan stood
nearly
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25% in 1990 before declining dramatically
less
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than 20% in 2010, and
then
remained relatively unchanged from 2010 to 2012 with roughly 18%.
In contrast
, the figures for China and India
initially
were almost the same with 3%.
While
the former witnessed a significant increase of nearly 30% by overtaking the percentage of
export
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to Japan, the latter remained stable until 200, and
then
reached 5% in 2012. Focusing
another
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country, in the first year, the proportion of
export
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to the USA was recorded
10
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at 10
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%.
However
, it saw a wide fluctuation
between
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beginning from 1990 and eventually reached approximately 6% in the
last
year.
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