The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
The maps highlight data about the transformations which happened in three separate years in Willington (1780, 1860 and 2000).
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the town witnessed remarkable developments, including
construction
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of a new bridge over the
river
, shopping centres and sports fields over the period in question. The interesting point is that as time passed, the number of homes increased. Looking into detail, in 1780, there were four farms in the centre of the town, but they declined to two and none in 1960 and 2000 respectively. In 1860, A new road which connected homes with the
river
was built. After 1780, a new bridge was constructed above the
river
and several trees were cut down by residents until 1860, and they were
then
demolished because of building schools and sports areas. If we look at an area of villages, it extended in the subsequent years and another road, which created a link between homes and commercial facilities was introduced to the public in 2000. As for the southwest part of the town, a wetland for birds was erected
at the end
of the
river
. Shopping centres were added to the right area of the
river
.
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