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The charts below show the average consumption of three nutrients by adults in the UK. All of these nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average consumption of three nutrients by adults in the UK. All of these nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The pie chart below
showcase
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showcases
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 the three nutrients (
sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
) consumed daily by an average
person
 in the UK.
In
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Overall
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overall
, high
sugar
 is
immensly
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immensely
 favourable with a portion of nearly half of a
person
's appetite through the day, which
contained
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is contained
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 heavily in snacks.
Additionally
, increased
amount
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amounts
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 of
sodium
 tend to
imply
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be implied
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 in dinner meals. All of these nutrients are found the
leats
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least
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 in breakfast, with mostly filled with just
lower
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less
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 than 20% of all ingredients. During lunch,
usually
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usually,
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 a
person
eat
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eats
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 meals containing nearly 30% of
sodium
 and only 26% of saturated fat.
On the other hand
, foods containing high
sodium
 peaked during dinner with a portion
42
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of 42
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%,
while
sugar
is
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was
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 least consumed during
this
 period by only just a little over 19%.
Lastly
, a
person
 ends the day with almost half up to 45% of snacks filled with added
sugar
,
comprises
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comprised
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 of less fat by 19% and
sodium
in
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by
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 17%.
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