LETTER OF APOLOGY Topic 3: You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Jones,
Good morning.I am writing to apologise for my huge mistake
at
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in
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the mathematic
mathematic
class yesterday.Since it was Replace the word
mathematics
unintentially
and I had not planned to do Correct your spelling
unintentional
such
a stupid thing I sincerely ask you to accept my apology.
First of all, I want to tell you about the situation before you entered
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to
the classroom. Peter was laughing at me Change preposition
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due to
my errors in math practice questions. He tried to persuade the others to call me "dull Roy" and I could not tolerate his rude behaviour and throwed
my bag Correct your spelling
threw
toward
him. Exactly at that Change preposition
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time
you entered and my bag Add a comma
time,
hitted
your face.
You do not know how much I am sorry about my wrong manner. When I re-think about yesterday I feel Correct your spelling
hit
owful
about myself. As You know it is expected from a Correct your spelling
awful
studend
to do something wrong and be ashamed after a Correct your spelling
student
while
and I am completely in this
situation now.
I humbly request you to forgive me. I promise it was the last
time I misbehaved in your class and did not respect to
you.
Yours sincerely,
Roy WalkerChange preposition
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Content Depth
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Structure
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Format
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Organization
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Tone
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