The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart shows the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, the bar chart shows the
number
of aged people working in four countries Australia, Japan, the USA and Belgium during the period 1970 and 2000. The percentage of men
workers
in Australia during the time 1970 was 74 per
cent
and in 2000 it was reduced to 47 per
cent
. Japan have the highest
number
of
workers
with 84 per
cent
and in 2000 it decreased to 76 per
cent
. The USA was the
last
country which had a lower
number
of
workers
compared to other nations with 73 per
cent
after that during 2000 it was reduced to 55 per
cent
. And Belgium was the
last
country it was in the second nation with 79 per
cent
and after 2000 it had only 19 per
cent
of aged men
workers
. Australia had 18 per
cent
of women
workers
during 1970 but in 2000 it increased to 19 per
cent
. Japan had 43 per
cent
of
workers
in 1970 and in 2000 it was reduced to 40 per
cent
. The USA had 36 per
cent
of
workers
in 1970 and it increased to 38 per
cent
. Belgium had the least
number
of women
workers
between 1970 and 2000 with 8 and 7 per
cent
.
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  • Employment rate
  • Percentage
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Gender disparity
  • Trend
  • Decline
  • Improvement
  • Variation
  • Noteworthy
  • Aligned
  • Comparative analysis
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