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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
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The bar graph gives information about how much free
time
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 two categories of gender spent in five
employment
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 statuses per week from 1998 to 1999. In general, what stands out from the figure is that the highest amount of
time
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 was in
unemploymend
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unemployment
 and retired bars.,
in contrast
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, the least leisure
time
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 was in part-
time
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 jobs and housewives’
employment
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.
Firstly
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, in
employment
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, full-
time
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 men and women spent relaxing moment about 48 and 38
hours
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, respectively. The next category is
employment
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 part-
time
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, which consists of approximately 45
hours
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 for
females
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, but there was no data for males.
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, the same condition we can see in the housewives figures, for
females
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 leisure
time
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 was around 50
hours
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.
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, the same highest number of spare
time
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 was unemployment and retired
employment
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 status, for
females
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 stood at 70
hours
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 and for the males were more by 10
hours
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 as
females
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.
Overall
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, in the five
employment
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 jobs, only
in
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3 figures gave information about how much males had a relaxing
time
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, employment, hours, females with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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