The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The bar graph gives information about how much free
time
two categories of gender spent in five
employment
statuses per week from 1998 to 1999. In general, what stands out from the figure is that the highest amount of
time
was in
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unemployment
and retired bars.,
in contrast
, the least leisure
time
was in part-
time
jobs and housewives’
employment
.
Firstly
, in
employment
, full-
time
men and women spent relaxing moment about 48 and 38
hours
, respectively. The next category is
employment
part-
time
, which consists of approximately 45
hours
for
females
, but there was no data for males.
Additionally
, the same condition we can see in the housewives figures, for
females
leisure
time
was around 50
hours
.
On the other hand
, the same highest number of spare
time
was unemployment and retired
employment
status, for
females
stood at 70
hours
and for the males were more by 10
hours
as
females
.
Overall
, in the five
employment
jobs, only
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3 figures gave information about how much males had a relaxing
time
.
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