You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Wrik a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work. say what you want the shop or company to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to you to draw your attention towards the Dell laptop that I recently bought from your
one of Correct pronoun usage
apply
stores
located in Orchard Correct article usage
the stores
park
in Capitalize word
Park
kelowa
two weeks ago.
It was working properly for a week. After that, I was having trouble Change the capitalization
Kelowa
Wrong verb form
turning
to turn
it on. It was shutting down on its own . I was pretty surprised how Change the verb form
turning
can be
the latest model of Verb problem
apply
well-known
institution is faulty.
I am working remotely as a college student. I have to attend classes, work on assignments and many other things.Add an article
the well-known
a well-known
Unfortunatly
, Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
this
device is giving me hard
time Correct article usage
a hard
to complete
my tasks on time. I have ongoing a few projects at the current moment. I am totally dependent on Change the verb form
completing
this
laptop to finish my work before deadline
.
Correct article usage
the deadline
Finally
, Correct article usage
the Warrenty
Warrenty
of Correct your spelling
warranty
this
item is still valid. what I would like the dompany
Correct your spelling
company
to
Correct your spelling
do
Add a missing verb
do is
is provide
meChange the verb form
provide
a
new laptop or I will be happy to get a replacement as soon as possible.
Thank you for giving your attention to Add the preposition
with a
this
matter. Please let me know If need any another
information.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Correct quantifier usage
other
faith fully
,
Maninder Correct your spelling
faithfully
kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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Spelling
Ensure to proofread your letter for minor spelling errors such as 'dompany' which should be 'company' and 'Warrenty' which should be 'Warranty'.
Details
Consider providing a specific model or purchase date of the laptop for more precise identification by the company or shop.
Content
You have effectively described the problem with the equipment and how it's impacting your work.
Structure
The structure of your letter, with clear introduction, explanation of the issue, effect on your work, and a closing request, is well-organized.
Tone
You've maintained a polite and formal tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for the context.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,