You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar charts given illustrate the proportion of occupation based on gender with

range

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of age from 60 to 64 in Australia, Japan, the USA and Belgium between 1970 and 2000.

Overall

, the percentage of

man

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men

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declines

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declined

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significantly in 2000 compared to 1970

while

the portion of women shows the opposite. In 1970, the four countries

reveal

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revealed

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that

man

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men

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aged 60-64 in employment are more than 70%.

For example

, in

Japan

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Japan,

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84% were hired in 1970

and

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which

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become

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became

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the highest rate

on

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of

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employement

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employment

at that time.

Likewise

, Australia, the USA and Belgium show a portion of 74%, 73% and 79% respectively.

However

, these

number

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were plummetting

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plummeted

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in 2000.

Women

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Women's

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occupancy booked a different trend, which is

show

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shown

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the

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contrary. The ratio of women

with

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in

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the same age range

with

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as

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the man

a man

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man

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men

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were vary

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varied

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from 8% to 43% in 1970.

However

,

this

number

remain

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remains

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stable in comparison to other

gender

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genders

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. All of the countries

shows

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a

slightly

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slight

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increase and decrease at the same time