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You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, give details of the ad that you want to publish mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page say how you would like to pay for the advertisement

#rent #apartment #editor #newspaper #ad #front #page #advertisement
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to acknowledge regarding an
advertiestment
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advertisement
on
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for
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 my apartment which I plan to rent out as soon as possible. The
appartment
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apartment
 is small in size and 2000 square feet with
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a spaciouse
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spaciouse
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spacious
 interior layout. It has all the utilities and essential requirements with all the facilities which
need
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are needed
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to
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for
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 a small family. The location address is 11445 90th Avenue and able to make an
appoitment
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appointment
for
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to
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 look
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 observation in advance.
Moreover
, I would prefer to post
this
advertiestment
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advertisement
in
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 the front page for
the
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apply
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better reach for the readers.
Further
, It would be easy for me to pay by using
credit
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a credit
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 card facility if you are accepting that method. If not I can arrange a payment check for your details. Hope you will reply
me
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 soon with the payment details. Thank You Faithfully Jimmy Silva
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Grammar & Spelling
Be sure to proofread to catch and correct minor grammatical or spelling errors.
Sentence Variation
Consider varying your sentence structure to enrich the text.
Detailed Description
Detailing the apartment's features and benefits could make the ad more appealing.
Specific Details
Use specific dates or deadlines if you have a preference for when the ad should be published.
Clear Request
The request for the advertisement to be placed on the front page was clearly stated.
Clear Description
You provided an easy-to-understand description of your apartment.
Appropriate Tone
The polite tone throughout the letter is appropriate for its purpose.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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