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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts
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 a comparative analysis of the
units
 of
electricity
 by fuel source in
Australia
 and
France
 in 1980 and 2000. The total
production
 in both countries increased during the period, with the
figure
of
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Australia
raised
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rising
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 from 100
units
 in 1980 to 170
units
 in 2000,
while
France
doubling
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 its 1980
figure
 in 2000 to 180
units
 in total. More precisely, in
Australia
, coal
comprising
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comprised
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 half of the total
production
 in 1980, with
oil
, natural
gas
 and
hydro
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hydropower
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power
 sharing the rest 50
units
, with 20
units
, 20
units
 and 10
units
 respectively. In 2000, the
figure
of
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for
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 coal raised dramatically to 130
units
, with
hydro
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hydropower
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power
incresed
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increased
 slightly to 36
units
.
Conversely
,
oil
 and natural
gas
 produced much less
electricity
 than before, both contributed 2
units
repectively
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respectively
.
Situation
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The situation
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 was different in
France
. Coal,
oil
, natural
gas
 and nuclear
power
 evenly shared the total
production
, with each around 20
units
 in 1980. Two decades later,
electricity
 produced by nuclear
power
 grew significantly to 126
units
 of an
overall
 180
units
, about 3/4 of the whole. Meanwhile, the
figure
of
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for
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oil
 and coal remained stable, with
hydro
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hydropower
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power
 and natural
gas
drop
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dropping
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 dramatically to 2
units
 each.
Overall
, the
electricity
production
 pattern in both countries varied during the two decades, with
France
adopted
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adopting
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 cleaner energy sources,
while
Australia
sticked
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stuck
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 to the traditional way of
electricity
production
.
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