The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park secondary school since it's construction in 1950. Summarise the information and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent 1950 Main road Houses school Farmland playground 1980 Main road Car park science block school Sports field play ground 2010 Main road Car park science block school Sports field play ground
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The diagram illustrates the substantial changes in the West Park secondary
school
zone in three different periods with 30-year intervals from 1950 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the school
and playground still remain in the same position. However
, other facilities have been substituted from time to time.
The school
stood at the same place but there was an extension of the science block on the left-handed side of the school
and the proposal of the old building was changed into a main building and it stayed the same throughout 2010. On the other hand
, the playground area which was the same size as the school
in 1950 and located at the bottom of the school
was
decreased in 2010.
The farmland and Houses in 1950 were replaced by the carpark, the new science block and the sports field. Unnecessary verb
apply
In addition
, in 2010, the sports field's size was reduced and relocated to beside the playground. The car park in 1980 was expanded and replaced the 1980 sport field area.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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