The pie chart below shows bottled water consumption in various regions as a percent of global consumption and bar chart shows the growth of bottled water consumption in 2001.

The pie chart below shows bottled water consumption in various regions as a percent of global consumption and bar chart shows the growth of bottled water consumption in 2001.
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The given pie chart and bar chart provide insights into the
consumption
of bottled
water
across different regions of the world in 1999 and how it evolved by 2001.
Overall
, Asia emerged as the largest consumer of bottled
water
at the outset of the
period
,
while
Western
Europe
and the USA showed relatively lower levels of usage. By the end of the
period
, most regions (Asia, the Middle East, Africa, Latin America, New Zealand, Australia, and the USA) had experienced substantial
growth
in bottled
water
consumption
, except for Western
Europe
.
To begin
with, the Middle East and Africa
initially
had low
consumption
rates, each accounting for only 5% in 1999.
However
, by 2001, both regions had seen a significant increase of nearly 10% in bottled
water
consumption
.
Similarly
, Latin America and New Zealand, which started at 10% and 13%, respectively, in 1999,
also
witnessed a comparable
growth
rate by 2001, each reaching approximately 13%. Equally obvious is that Asia led in bottled
water
consumption
at the start of the
period
with 48%, maintaining its position by 2001 with a 14% increase.
In contrast
, Western
Europe
experienced modest
growth
during
this
period
, around 3%. Notably, the USA showed a notable increase of nearly 8% in bottled
water
consumption
in 2001, unlike Western
Europe
, which saw comparatively slower
growth
.
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