the graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a european country between 1979 and 2004. summarise the infomrations by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The given chart illustrates the total amount of 4 diverse types of meat namely fish, lamb,

beef

and

chicken

during a 25-year period.

Overall

, it can be seen that the production of lamp

beef

and

chicken

witnessed a declining trend whilst the figure for fish had an increasing trend.And the consumption of fish meat was lowest throughout the period. In 1979 the consumption of

beef

and

chicken

was approximately the same point by 150

grams

Then

the figure for

chicken

dramatically went up and reached the highest point at over 250

grams

. Meanwhile, the amount of

chicken

meat plummeted to 70

grams

The production of

beef

ranked first in 1979 with over 260

grams

then

gradually decreased to about 100

grams

in 1984 to 160

grams

finally

, it steadily went down to finish the whole period in 2004

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, chicken, grams with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.

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3 paragraphs

138 words

7.00

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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