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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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graph illustrates the
population
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 of
India
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 and
China
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 from 2000 to the
end
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 of 2050 for the present day with the development of projections.
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, the
population
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 of
India
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 rose considerably. Meanwhile,
China
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 has a steady growth until 2020 and gradually decreases after that. In more detail, in 2000, the
population
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 of
India
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 was one trillion, increased sharply to about 1.45
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billions
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 in 2030, and has the same
population
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 as
China
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.
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end
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 of the period, the
population
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 of
India
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 hit a peak of about 1.6
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billions
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 by the
end
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 of 2050.
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,
China
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's
population
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 was approximately 1.25
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 in 2000, and the number of people has increased steadily until the year
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2030, when its peak is nearly 1.45
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billions
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. After the year
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2030, the Chinese
population
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 began to decline slowly and is predicted to drop to 1.4
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billions
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 by the
end
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 of 2050.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, end, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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