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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words.
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The given
ling
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long
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 graph depicts the methods of moving goods in
UK
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the UK
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 during the period of 1974 to 2002 . As can
be see
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 from the chart
that
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apply
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,
Road
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the Road
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 was the most
prefered
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preferred
 way to transport
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goods
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good
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goods
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 from one
Point
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point
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 to another location followed by Water and y rail. In 1974, around 75
million
tonnes
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of good
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good
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goods
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 were transported by road.
However
 , it swelled
singnificantly
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significantly
 and reached
to
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approximatly
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approximately
 95
million
tonnes
 In 2002.
Furthermore
, water and rail were equally selected by
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 in terms of transport around 40
millions
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million
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tonnes
 during the period 1974 to 1975. Meanwhile, water rose
grately
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greatly
 and Peaked
around
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at around
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 65
million
tonnes
.
According to
chart
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the chart
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, Pipeline mode was the
most
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apply
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least
Prefered
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Preferred
 way as compared to all other modes.
During
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 1974 to 1978, It was just around 5
million
tonnes
. After
that
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that,
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 it
was
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increased slightly in 1980 and
maintain
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maintained
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Steadly
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Steady
 growth till 1993. From 1995 to 2002 it remained Stable
around
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at around
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 23
million
tonnes
.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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