The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006
The chart below compares the
percentage
change in the share of International graduates among students at university in different Canadian universities between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
, during this
five-year period , we can see that all different Canadian provinces had a rise in percentage
of international graduates.
Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador and Ontario had the same Add an article
the percentage
percentage
in 2001 , however
, in 2006 Monitoba
and Newfoundland and Labrador moved upward from 3% to 7% but, Ontario increased to 6% .
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Manitoba
And
New Brunswick , Nova Scotia and Quebec had a different rise between 2001 and 2006. New Brunswick increased to 12% and had Correct word choice
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high
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a higher
percentage
than the last
two universities
In comparison last
two Canadian unversity which are Alberta and British Columbia had the same percentage
in 2001. But British Columbia had high
rise than Alberta in 2006 . Because British Columbia went up from 4.5% to 11% and Alberta to 7 %Correct word choice
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