You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Rose Smith. The purpose of my correspondence today is to apprise you
with
a recent incident, which led me to miss my Change preposition
of
flight
day
before yesterday. Allow me to elaborate on Correct article usage
the day
this
.
On 22d January when I was travelling from Delhi to Mumbal
by Victoria Airways. All my Correct your spelling
Mumbai
check in
luggage was checked and I was ready to fly; Add a hyphen
check-in
however
, one of your staff members came and rechecked all my baggage, and during this
checking
he lost Add a comma
checking,
keys
Correct article usage
the keys
of
my document bag. Change preposition
to
Therefore
, I missed my flight
. Moreover
, the second flight
to Mumbai was on 25h of January.
I was travelling to Mumbai foe
Correct your spelling
for
a
important business meeting, My clients who are from Dubal came to Mumbai for two days to attend Change the article
an
this
meeting. But, due to
your staff's mistake
I missed my conference and lost my deal,
Being a loyal patron to your flights, Add a comma
mistake,
least
I deserve is a full remuneration of my Correct article usage
the least
flight
tickets.
Nevertheless
, I would like to request airways
to give me compensation for my accommodation for two nights Capitalize word
Airways
due to
missed
Correct article usage
the missed
flight
.
I look forward to seeing how my suggestion translates into prompt action on your side.
Yours Faithfully,
Rose SmithSubmitted by patel2dhruvil202 on
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Grammar/Spelling
Consider carefully checking and correcting minor spelling and grammatical mistakes, such as '22d' (22nd), 'Mumbal' (Mumbai), 'Victoria Airways' (formatting consistency), 'foe' (for), and 'Dubal' (Dubai), to enhance readability and accuracy.
Clarity/Precision
Work on clarity and precision in describing events. Instead of saying 'during this checking he lost keys of my document bag', specify how it directly caused you to miss your flight for greater impact.
Flow
Try to ensure a coherent flow between paragraphs by using linking words or phrases. This enhances the overall readability of the letter.
Task Achievement
You have clearly stated your situation, the impact of the missed flight, and your expectations from the airline, which meets the task requirements effectively.
Structure
The structure of the letter, including the introduction, explanation, and conclusion, is well organized.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.