The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The graph below depicts

2010

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the 2010

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rate of men and

women

who did regular physical

activity

in Australia in 2010, grouped by

age

. As is observed from the chart,

although

the majority of men

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between 15 to 24, do regular physical

activity

, in the later

age

group

women

have

the

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higher percentage. Australian male’s percentage of

doing

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daily exercise is the highest

in

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at

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age

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ages

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15 to 24,

by

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at

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52.8 %.

However

, it’s dropping gradually to the second and third

group

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groups

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, by 42.2 and 39.5 %, respectively. Over

age

45, exercise rates rebound and rise steadily, with 43.1 %. 45.1 % for

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those age

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age

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aged

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55 to 64, and 46.7 % for

over

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those over

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65 years old.

On the other hand

,

australian

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women

have a different pattern. At the start of the timeframe, only 47.7 % do regular physical

activity

. It slowly

increase

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and peaked in

age

45 to 54 with 53.3 %.

However

, it’s slowly declining and

at the end

of the timeframe, the percentage of

women

doing regular physical

activity

is only 47.1 %.