The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 201 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph illustrates

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a comparison

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between

number

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a number

the number

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of shop

closures

and openings in one country from 2011 to 2018. Depending on

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information, 2011

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the highest rate of openings

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8500

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number dramatically declined by

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2018,

while

closures

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constantly changing results.

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opening rates of shops exceed the

closures

by 2000 difference, it

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undeniable to expect

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trend of 4000 within a year.Increasing results survived till 2014 were both opening and closers had similar rates of over 6000. For the end of

2018

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2018,

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the number of shops that opened hit its lowest by 3000. Closure numbers

od

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of

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shops had drastically changing performance as it began with around 6300 in 2011,

however

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tragic decrease

happed

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in 2015 by 500

closures

.

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2016

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2018 steady rates become 5000.