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The pie chart illustrates the information about the percentage of the reaction given by people
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at
new
shopping mall in Auckland, New Zealand.
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a new
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percentages
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apply
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To begin
with, the
large percentage of people are satisfied with Correct article usage
a
this
mall which is 62% as compared to other reaction
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reactions
On the other hand
, the least segment of this
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.
Looking at statistics, the second most part of chart
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are dissatisfied
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mall
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