The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers.

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The table illustrates the individual students who live in the UK, passed English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9 and

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the percentage of male candidates.

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,the male proportion was lower than the female and the male qualification percentage was higher in the

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but Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees

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qualification ratio was lower than the

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were almost 27% which was a fourth of female participants.

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, for Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees, male

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were near about 18%,which was 10% below

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was almost 25% and it was a fourth of female

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,the male ratio was 22.7% which was lower than 2007/8 session and around a fourth of female candidates.

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,for Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees,the male qualifier ratio was the lowest in the table,which was approximately 12% and much lower than female candidates.

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The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers.

Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All level of education, from primary to tertiary school should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. What extent do you agree?

“Libraries are irrelevant in the age of the internet and should not be publicly funded.” Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowsadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on themselves and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.