The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers.

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The table illustrates the individual students who live in the UK, passed English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9 and

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the percentage of male candidates.

Overall

,the male proportion was lower than the female and the male qualification percentage was higher in the

TEFL

exam

but Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees

exam

qualification ratio was lower than the

TEFL

. On the one hand,In 2007/8 for the

TEFL

exam

, male

qualifiers

were almost 27% which was a fourth of female participants.

In addition

, for Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees, male

qualifiers

were near about 18%,which was 10% below

TEFL

Moreover

,the total number of male

qualifiers

was almost 25% and it was a fourth of female

qualifiers

On the other hand

,In 2008/9 for the

TEFL

exam

,the male ratio was 22.7% which was lower than 2007/8 session and around a fourth of female candidates.

Additionally

,for Cambridge UCLES CELTA & other degrees,the male qualifier ratio was the lowest in the table,which was approximately 12% and much lower than female candidates.

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The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers.

Government should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Private car ownership has been increasing over the past few decades. This has given ordinary people greater mobility, but has also led to concerns about traffic congestion and air pollution. Do the advantages of private car ownership outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health, others believe that government should make sure that their are healthy.Discuss both views and give your opinion.