Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to bring into
your attention that I have Change preposition
to
accidently
left my Correct your spelling
accidentally
jacket
at the "Cineplex Halls" located in the
Brampton Correct article usage
apply
city
, which is under your supervision. It was an "Old Navy" made Capitalize word
City
jacket
, brown coloured and has some grafitti
design Correct your spelling
graffiti
printes
on the back.
It was 18th of the Correct your spelling
printed
april
and I was seated at H4 seat number during the show of the "Black Phone" movie in the H auditorium. The theater was not crowded that day and I believe I put my Change the capitalization
April
jacket
on the left seat next to me.
There are some important documents like my driver
license, health card and my credit card in that Change noun form
driver's
jacket
. I want you to please allocate someone to find my jacket
, once you find it call me at phone number 705-888-8888 or E-mail me at [email protected]. I will come and pick it.
I hope you will understand my concern as I am missing my Change preposition
up.
jacket
and more importantly some of my essential documents. I request you to give this
issue your's
immediate attention.
Looking Change noun form
your
to
hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sameer RanaRephrase
forward to
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Task Achievement
Ensure that all the details provided are relevant to the main purpose of the letter. Avoid including unnecessary information that doesn’t contribute to your request.
Coherence and Cohesion
Double-check for minor inaccuracies in spelling and grammar to further polish your writing. Small errors can be improved with careful proofreading.
Task Achievement
The letter effectively communicates the main purpose and requests specific actions to be taken.
Coherence and Cohesion
The structure of the letter, with clear paragraphs for introduction, details, and conclusion, aids in understanding and flow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite