The pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy generated from five different sources, namely Hydropower, Oil, Nuclear power, Coal, Natural gas, in a particular nation between 1983 and 2003.
The pie charts
compere
various forms of energy sources which Correct your spelling
compare
produced
from 1983 to 2003.
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were produced
It is clear that
Oil was a
dominant in twenty years Change the article
apply
although
, Hydroelectric power
, a renewable origin of energy, was at the lowest stage of supplying power
.
Regarding the statistics information, what stands out from the schemes is that Oil with 42% had the first point among others however
, it experienced a dramatic decrease to 33% in two decades. Moreover
, Natural gas stood at the second stage with 26% and dipped negligibly by 1% in the period. Another non renewable
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non-renewable
power
,coal, showed a marked growth from 22% to 27% between 1983 to 2003.
looking at the graphs more closely depict that both Hydroelectric power
and Nuclear power
covered 5% of requirements and amount
of nuclear usage doubled from 1983 to 2003 Correct article usage
the amount
while
the amount of Hydroelectric utilization maintained
at the same level in these years.Add a missing verb
was maintained
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