The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart reveals the
production
and
electricity
consumption
in 2014
according to
the top 10 countries.
Overall
, China leads the usage and
production
of
electricity
with 5,398
production
and 5,322 for
electricity
usage.
Subsequently
, the United States becomes the second country in
this
case, with 4.099
production
and 3,866
electricity
consumption
. The lowest
production
and
consumption
is held by the Korean Republic. The countries which are
production
and
consumption
averages under 1000 and not below 500 are Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany. Russia has quite the same
production
and
consumption
, its
production
is 1,057 and 1,038 for
consumption
. After that, Japan has 936,2 for
production
and 866 for
electricity
usage. Canada and India,
also
have similar numbers of percentages which are above 600 It can be seen that France, Brazil, and Germany have similar
electricity
production
and
consumption
percentages which they reach 500 in
production
and above 400 in
consumption
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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