The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart reveals the
production
and electricity
consumption
in 2014 according to
the top 10 countries.
Overall
, China leads the usage and production
of electricity
with 5,398 production
and 5,322 for electricity
usage. Subsequently
, the United States becomes the second country in this
case, with 4.099 production
and 3,866 electricity
consumption
. The lowest production
and consumption
is held by the Korean Republic.
The countries which are production
and consumption
averages under 1000 and not below 500 are Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany. Russia has quite the same production
and consumption
, its production
is 1,057 and 1,038 for consumption
. After that, Japan has 936,2 for production
and 866 for electricity
usage. Canada and India, also
have similar numbers of percentages which are above 600 It can be seen that France, Brazil, and Germany have similar electricity
production
and consumption
percentages which they reach 500 in production
and above 400 in consumption
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